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也許我們並不總是記得

夢的味道

以及

話的感覺 

或者只是一個擱淺的夢

消瘦樹蔭

離枝

且花落 

誤讀滿潮拍打回聲礁岩

喧囂擾外

渴望白紙鋪陳

盛開一串

夢與話

{◎}

迴圈

 

 

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仙 道
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I feel you all around
2006/12/06 01:31


Your love is... an ocean,
Where sand meets the sea,
Waves of love rolling over me,

Your love comes to me,
As the tide comes to the shore,
Wanting and needing to embrace me more,

Your love is... the moon,
Shinning across the shimmering sea,
Deep, wide, strong, and calm.
Always there to carry me..

Your love is... my shelter,
My compass, my true north,
Where ever I go, your love is guiding me forth,

Your love is.... the fresh ocean breeze,
Gently sweeping across my face,
Touching me from place to place,

Your love is...
The salty air I smell,
Clearing my thoughts and thinking,

Your love is...
The life preserver that keeps me from sinking,

When I go there to the sea,
I am not alone, for your love is with me,

I feel you all around,
The beauty, the wind, the mystery,

Your love engulfs me,
Takes my breath away,
Holds me in wind's arms,

When I close my eyes,
Dancing memories of your charms,
Never escape my deepest memory,

So if ever our souls part to say goodbye,
Meet me there, where the sea meets the sky,

Your love will forever be with me,
Where the sands touch the sea,

Our love lives on,
Our love flows back out into all eternity



仙 道

淺淡
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呵~
2006/12/05 08:34
Be my guest!

相視而笑,莫逆於心....
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淡淡的最美
2006/12/04 20:43

收藏生命中深濃情感
佐以淺淡文字
記錄生命

-淺淡-

好美的網誌......

好美的名字......

下回我可要引用這名字    淺淡.....淡淡的最好.....淡淡的最美.....


天寬地遠 雲淡風清

淺淡
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The other dream
2006/12/04 09:36

夢的觸覺..........

嗯~ 喜歡這句

相較於嗅覺


張平詠
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好可愛
2006/12/02 04:21
這夢都快失去觸覺
迴圈不說話,就
淺淡的幽了這夜一默..