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Topic: How to save the forests? / How to reduce paper waste?

1. Don’t cut down more trees.

2. Don’t use more things that make from woods.

3. You can save paper in your workplace and use the recycled papers that not

only protect the environment but save you a lot of money.

4. You can use electronic mail that can save much time and save the paper

successfully.

5. Don’t use too much wrapping paper to wrap a package.

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劃線處文法錯誤,自行訂正。

紅字句子不完整,缺主要子句。改寫如下: Because we don’t have enough money, we can’t buy water-saved devices.

斜體字文意不明,請查正確用字。

1.Don’t cut down trees any more.

Yes,we do that. Because we are students,we can`t cut          the trees.

2. Reduce         use  things that are made from wood.

We don`t do         . Because we have many tests every day and the papers of  tests  are made from wood. But we will try hard  1.Don’t cut down trees any more.

Yes,we do that. Because we are students,we can`t cut the trees.

3. You can save paper in your workplace and use the recycled papers,which not only protects the environment but saves you a lot of money.

Yes,we do that. We try to use the paper many times in these days.

in the future.

 

4. You can use electronic mail that can save much time and save the paper successfully.

   Yes,sometimes I do not have much time so I will use electronic mails.Electronic mails are soconvenient and save much time.Adding can save the paper why don't you.  

5. Don’t use too much wrapping paper to wrap a package.

 Yes,I use the discardable newspaper is instead of wrapping when I wrap the presents.

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1.Don’t cut down trees any more.

Yes,we do that. Because we are students,we can`t cut the trees.

2. Reduce use  things that are made from wood.

We don`t do. Because we have many tests every day and the papers of  tests  are made from wood. But we will try hard  for the future.

3. You can save paper in your workplace and use the recycled papers,which not only protects the environment but saves you a lot of money.

Yes,we do that. We try to use the paper many times in these days.

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4. You can use electronic mail that can save much time and save the paper successfully.

   Yes,sometimes I do not have much time so I will use electronic mails.Electronic mails are soconvenient and save much time.Adding can save the paper why don't you.  

5. Don’t use too much wrapping paper to wrap a package.

 Yes,I use the discardable newspaper is instead of wrapping when I wrap the presents.

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1. Don’t cut down more trees any more.

2. Reduce to use more things that are made from wood.

3. You can save paper in your workplace and use the recycled papers, which not only protects the environment but saves you a lot of money.

4. You can use electronic mail that can save much time and save the paper

successfully.

5. Don’t use too much wrapping paper to wrap a package.

 

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