1. Always turn the lights off when we leave a room.

Yes. We always remember to turn the light off when we leave    room.

2. Don’t have the computer on all day.

Yes. We always stay in the school. (跟計畫的關係?)

3. Unplug any electrical appliances when not using them .

Yes. We avoid the electric appliance being destroyed by the thunder (跟計畫的關係?)

4. Set the air conditioner at the temperature above 28 .

Yes. We keep the temperature at 26-28.

5. Turn off an electrical appliance whenever we finish using it .

Yes. For acquired accustomed to saves the energy (不完整)

1. Always turn the lights off when we leave a room.

Yes. We always remember to turn the light off when we leave room.

2. Don’t have the computer on all day.

Yes. We always stay in the school.

3. Unplug any electrical appliances when not using them .

Yes. We avoid the electric appliance destroying by the thunder

4. Set the air conditioner at the temperature above 28 .

Yes. We keep the temperature at 26-28.

5. Turn off an electric al appliance whenever we finish using it .

Yes. For acquired accustomed to saves the energy

1.    Always turn the lights off when you leave a room.

2.     Don’t have the computer on all day.

3.     Unplug any electrical appliances when not using them.

4.     Set the air conditioner at the temperature above 28.

5.     Turn off an electrical appliance whenever we finish using it.

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