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How to save water? 4號李宥儒 5號李珈樺 6號杜知宜
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Topic: How to save water?

1.I will share water conservation tips with friends and neighbors.

2.I will turn off the water while brushing teeth and washing face.

3.Wash my fruits and vegetables in a pan of water instead of running water from

   the  tap.

4.When you are washing your hands, don't let the water run while you lather.

5.To save water and time, consider washing your face or brushing your teeth while in the shower.


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斜體字文意不明,請查正確用字。

紅字句子不完整,缺主要子句。改寫如下: Because we don’t have enough money, we can’t buy water-saved devices.

1.Yes, we share the conservation together.

5.No, because we always eat a lot of  food after we take a bath.

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1.Yes,we share the conservation together.

2.Yes,we always turn off the water while we are brushing  our teeth and washing  our  faces.

3.Yes, we put  fruits and vegetables in a pan of water  instead of running water from
the   tap.So,we can save a lot of water.

4.Yes,we turn off the tap when we wash our hands.

5.No,because we always eat a lot of  food after we take a bath.



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3.Wash  my  fruits and vegetables in a pan of water instead of running water from

   the   tap.

4.When you are washing your hands, don't let the water run while you lather.

5.To save water and time, consider washing your face or brushing your teeth while in the shower.

4.5.這是你們打算自己進行的計畫請改寫

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