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Topic: How to save water?

1. Collect the water you use for rinsing fruits and vegetables, then reuse it to water houseplants.

2. Run your clothes washer and dishwasher only when they are full.

3. When doing laundry, match the water level to the size of the load.

4. Share water conservation tips with friends and neighbors.

5. When you are washing your hands, don't let the water run while you lather.

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 紅字句子不完整,缺主要子句。改寫如下: Because we don’t have enough money, we can’t buy water-saved devices.

劃線處文法錯誤,自行訂正。

1.Unfinish,because we are too lazy and don't have houseplants.

2.Finish,we feel it save much water,time and electricity.

3.Unfinish,because we feel clothes is frowzy.

4.Finish,everyone save water together.

5.Finish,we feel it save much water.

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1.Unfinish,because we are too lazy and don't have houseplants.

2.Finish,we feel it save much water,time and electricity.

3.Unfinish,because we feel clothes is frowzy.

4.Finish,everyone save water together.

5.Finish,we feel it save much water.

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1. Collect the water you use for rinsing fruits and vegetables, and then reuse it to water houseplants.

p.s. 有些用字不像你們會的喔!請把那些字註明一下讓同學看的懂。

      例如:lather                 

這是你們要進行的計畫,請以第一人稱改寫



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