The Writing Club – 11 – Our Planet / The Dragon Boat
By cAmilla Wu
Friday, May 21st, 2010
Saturday, May 22nd, 2010
What Your Third Grader Needs to Know / What Your Sixth Grader Needs to Know / Grammar / Topic writing: Our Planet / The Dragon Boat
The Earth
by Yvonne YiFang Kao (Age 9)
Our Earth is a pretty place. There are many delightful people, cute animals and lovely plants on the earth.
But now we have bad things happen in the whole world. It is because we are hurting our mother nature and do bad things. Now the earth is angry and upset. We need to find a way to help the earth not getting sick.
If everyone can help the earth then the earth will be more cheerful, and more people will be able to survive.
The Planet Earth
by Isabel YiTing Kao (Age 11)
The earth is a lovely planet. Cut animals like to live on the earth, and plentiful plants are happy to live on the earth as well. But our earth is sick and unhappy because of the human beings' selfish behavior.
Earthquakes, tornados, volcano eruptions happen very often. Many poeple are homeless or had died because of these disasters, but we are still wasting resources. Everyone drives to work or turns on the air conditioner, which produces a lot of CO2.
We need to rescue our wonderful Earth and not polluting our environment. It takes everyone to help our planet earth!
The Dragon Boat
by Kevin ChuHan Wang (Age 9)
Take a look at the boat.
It is not titanic.
But it is fantastic.
The people on the boat
Wish to wins the silly goat.
Any team that wins the silly goat
has to jump into the dirty moat.
Would you want to join my team
To win the silly goat with me?
The Dragon Boat
by Peter YaoKai Yeh (Age 9)
In a hot hot morning,
The sun is blistering.
People are waiting
To watch the race.
They see the man
With a lace.
He's the comander
Checking the calender.
The race starts.
People race to the darts.
Look at the first dragon boat.
It's going to get to the moat.
Now our mates won.
The race has done.
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