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The Writing Club -- 3

By Camilla Wu

Saturday, November 20th, 2010

Newspaper / Grammar / Composition: Topic Writing--A Poem: Schools

A Poem: Schools

by Alyssa Chang   

Age 8

Schools are beautiful.

Schools are wonderful.

Schools are for children to learn and play.

They make children happy and upset.

Schools are blue.

Schools are red.

Schools have colors for children to relax.

But they make adults pay a lot of tax.



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The Writing Club – 2

By Camilla Wu

Saturday, October 16th, 2010

Newspaper / Grammar / Composition: Topic Writing--Halloween

Halloween

By Alyssa Chiang

Age 9

Halloween is the day that all the ghosts would come out and play tricks on human beings. It falls on October thirty-first every year.

People play a lot of games on Halloween. They sing songs, tell joikes and scary stories. Children might say, "Trick or treat?" or "Smell my feet; give me something good to eat."

I like Halloween because there are many fun activities to join and I like the feeling of being scared!



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The Writing Club – 1

By Camilla Wu

Saturday, September 18th, 2010

Newspaper / Grammar / Composition



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The Writing Club – 12 – My Summer Vacation

By cAmilla Wu 

Friday, June 18st, 2010

Saturday, June 19th, 2010

What Your Third Grader Needs to Know / What Your Sixth Grader Needs to Know / Grammar / Topic writing: My Summer Vacation



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The Writing Club – 11 – Our Planet / The Dragon Boat

By cAmilla Wu 

Friday, May 21st, 2010

Saturday, May 22nd, 2010

What Your Third Grader Needs to Know / What Your Sixth Grader Needs to Know / Grammar / Topic writing: Our Planet / The Dragon Boat

The Earth

by Yvonne YiFang Kao (Age 9)

Our Earth is a pretty place. There are many delightful people, cute animals and lovely plants on the earth.

But now we have bad things happen in the whole world. It is because we are hurting our mother nature and do bad things. Now the earth is angry and upset. We need to find a way to help the earth not getting sick.

If everyone can help the earth then the earth will be more cheerful, and more people will be able to survive.

The Planet Earth

by Isabel YiTing Kao (Age 11)

The earth is a lovely planet. Cut animals like to live on the earth, and plentiful plants are happy to live on the earth as well. But our earth is sick and unhappy because of the human beings' selfish behavior.

Earthquakes, tornados, volcano eruptions happen very often. Many poeple are homeless or had died because of these disasters, but we are still wasting resources. Everyone drives to work or turns on the air conditioner, which produces a lot of CO2.

We need to rescue our wonderful Earth and not polluting our environment. It takes everyone to help our planet earth!

The Dragon Boat

by Kevin ChuHan Wang (Age 9)

Take a look at the boat.

It is not titanic.

But it is fantastic.

The people on the boat

Wish to wins the silly goat.

Any team that wins the silly goat

has to jump into the dirty moat.

Would you want to join my team

To win the silly goat with me?

The Dragon Boat

by Peter YaoKai Yeh (Age 9)

In a hot hot morning,

The sun is blistering.

People are waiting

To watch the race.

They see the man

With a lace.

He's the comander

Checking the calender.

The race starts.

People race to the darts.

Look at the first dragon boat.

It's going to get to the moat.

Now our mates won.

The race has done.



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The Writing Club – 10 – Poetry 

By cAmilla Wu 

Saturday, April 17th, 2010

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 Summer

 by Kevin Wang (age 9)

The sun is bright and shimmering.

The rivers are cool and refreshing.

All the creatures are growing.

Students are looking forward to having a summer vacation.

Parents are happy to enjoy celebrating their family time with their children.

What a lovely summer it is,

if you relish it.

Dogs and Cats

by Yvonne Kao (age 9)

Dogs are cute.

They are never mute.

Cats are tame.

They are never the same.

Dogs and cats

might be friends

if they are lucky

to be my pets.

Flowers

by Isabel Kao (age 11)

Grandpa flowers are really old.

They love traveling around the world.

Fly and fly.

They are in a mess.

They are restless.

They never want to be homeless.

Could you possibly find a place

where Grandpa flowers are delighted to stay?



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