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Could I have your name, my lass?
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Could I have your name, my lass? 

by Camilla

Could I have your name, my lass?

A humble attitude I think I have.

Millions of tenderness I don’t lack.

Inside my heart hides my crave.

Luxurious fields might charm your day.

Lovely birds might be your maid.

All I have will be in your hand.

 

Incredible words you say to me.

Superior situation is not my dream.

 

Moonlight shows the way to the truth.

Yards of honesty will breed sweet fruits.

 

Numerous sayings are in our way.

Astonishing remarks lie in front of fakes.

Maybe I can be in your play.

Enormous wishes, however, will lead you to hate.

 




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People might feel uneasy, if someone keeps asking them their names which they don’t really want to tell. If it happens to you and you are a girl who doesn’t want to give your full interest or attention upon a boy, here is a good way for you to say how you feel. You are welcome to make your name in the poem as well. It seems that you are turning down on him; nevertheless, if he is smart enough, he will find out that “Camilla is my name.”

 

Moonlight shows the way to the truth.

Yards of honesty will breed sweet fruits.

These two sentences are the poet’s favorite. They not only visualize the scene but also disclose the value that the girl holds in her mind.

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