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作品名稱:The best friends

作  者:Rachel

作品種類:English Story

完稿時間:2005 Sep.03

作品簡介:這篇的故事是瑞琪兒依「The best Hooper」的故事架構改編而成的故事,在故事中瑞琪兒想像自己有兩隻小狗,並將小狗與小女孩間的友情故事做個描寫,所以說囉!誰說人和動物間不能存在著友情呢!

The Best Friends

This is Charlie’s dog. He is fat.

This is Soda’s dog.

 She is thin.

 They are my best friends.

 They like to run on the grass.

 Charlie’s dog can run as fast as Soda’s dog.

Soda’s dog wants to run faster than Charlie’s dog.

One day they were running together.

Charlie’s dog runs slower than Soda’s dog.

Soda’s dog is very happy.

She told him: “We can play together tomorrow.”

 “Ok!” said Charlie’s dog.

Next day Soda’s dog was playing with Charlie’s dog.

And one lion was coming.

He said: “This is my corner. Don’t play in my corner.”

Charlie’s dog said: “Why can’t we stay here? That is not your corner.”

The lion was very angry and wanted to fight with Charlie’s dog.

Charlie’s dog was very angry, too.

They wanted to fight.

Soda’s dog said:” Don’t fight! We can play together.”

The Lion said: “Ok!”

Then they played together, and lived in good country. 

 

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心中的感激

有著千千萬萬之多

說不盡

道不出

千言萬語

謝謝你

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甚至 Charlie's dog is fat but Soda's dog is thin.

也可寫成 Charlie's dog is fat but Soda's thin.

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1]

This is Charlie's dog. He is fat. This is Soda's dog. She is thin.

如果想把兩個句中併為一句:

Charlie's dog is fat but Soda's dog is thin.

如此寫會與下面的  they 有較強的語氣結合度

They are my best friends. They like to run on the grass.

2]

Charlie’s dog can run as fast as Soda’s dog.

第二次的 dog 宜略去 理由是 Soda’s為描述性質的形容詞 讀者知其後有一名詞但因相同而被省略

Charlie’s dog can run as fast as Soda’s.

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