網路城邦
回本城市首頁 Miffy-Mei 的魔幻世界
市長:★苗芯★  副市長: 雅夢琇子蒙娜丽莎的微笑
加入本城市推薦本城市加入我的最愛訂閱最新文章
udn城市情感交流親子家庭【Miffy-Mei 的魔幻世界】城市/討論區/
討論區英文故事 字體:
看回應文章  上一個討論主題 回文章列表 下一個討論主題
The TV’s man and the little boy
 瀏覽833|回應4推薦3

miffymei
等級:
留言加入好友
文章推薦人 (3)

恰恰
★苗芯★
馮小飆和把拔馬麻

作品名稱:The TV’s man and the little boy

作  者:Miffy

作品種類:English Story

完稿時間:2005 Aug. 22

作品簡介:這篇的故事架構是瑄瑄仿照傑克與魔豆改編而成的故事,在故事中小男孩用了他的牛和陌生的老婆婆換了一付通往邪惡巨人的家的鑰匙,小男孩的冒險故事就此展開。

The TV’s man and the little boy

One day the little boy’s mother said”You must go to sell a cow.”

The little boy said “OK! I will go to sell a cow.”

Next day the little boy went to sell a cow, and he saw an old woman need a cow. An old woman said “I need a cow. Could you give me your cow?”

She said “I will give you a bag of key.”

 The little boy said “OK! I will give you a cow.”

She gave a bag of key to him.

Then he took a bag of keys back home.

He took a bag of keys to his mother.

His mother said “You are a good boy, we can be rich.”

The next day, one key became a very tall tree; he went to a big tree and climbed up it.

He saw a big house, and he went into the house and the aunt of TV’s man said “You must go to the cabinet. My giant nephews, he went to cabinet.”

The giant came back and smell.

 He asks his aunt “Have the children in my house?”

 She said “There is no child in your house.”

Then the giant fall in sleeps.

The boy comes out and climbs down the tree.

 The boy and his mother were very happy and the key was very bright.

版權擁有者:瑞琪兒及Miffy-Mei的魔幻世界城市所有

版權使用說明:本城市所有文章非經作者或城市負責人同意不得轉錄或轉載,違者將擔負法律責任。 

 



本文於 修改第 2 次
回應 回應給此人 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘

引用
引用網址:https://city.udn.com/forum/trackback.jsp?no=52152&aid=1362029
 回應文章
謝謝秋風
推薦0


kokwawang
等級:
留言加入好友

 

小朋友有你的指導

未來文筆必定更加豐富及成熟

謝謝你

 



本文於 修改第 4 次
回應 回應給此人 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘
引用網址:https://city.udn.com/forum/trackback.jsp?no=52152&aid=1370098
秋風回應說明的很棒
推薦0


dearwife
等級:
留言加入好友

 

秋風的英文造詣不錯喲

加記一百分

回應 回應給此人 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘
引用網址:https://city.udn.com/forum/trackback.jsp?no=52152&aid=1369636
瑄瑄好幸福ㄋㄧㄝ
推薦0


★苗芯★
等級:6
留言加入好友

 

有小蘭子和秋風兩大高手指導文章   作文一定會進步的喲   加油加油喔

                                         \(^○^)/\(^○^)/


 ( ^^)Y☆Y(^^ )LOVE  ╮(╯◇╰)╭
回應 回應給此人 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘
引用網址:https://city.udn.com/forum/trackback.jsp?no=52152&aid=1367317
改編的故事更有趣
推薦1


馮小飆和把拔馬麻
等級:8
留言加入好友

 
文章推薦人 (1)

★苗芯★

傑克與魔豆的故事很有趣,

瑄瑄改編得很不錯唷!

回應 回應給此人 推薦文章 列印 加入我的文摘
引用網址:https://city.udn.com/forum/trackback.jsp?no=52152&aid=1362067