婚戀二曲調

（與金大俠合作）

她的眼兒媚，
他的眼兒威。
她看看一枚鑽戒，
他說是太貴。

他去了東籬，
她上了西樓。

他看看南山，
說是真陶醉。
她看看北斗，
說是難入睡。

他再去東籬，

把酒黃昏歸。
她又上西樓，

簾卷西風飛。

11/05/2017

英文譯詩附後

並請批評指正

Two Tones of Love and Marriage

Her eyes are charming

His eyes are mighty

She looks at a diamond ring
He says it’s too pricy

He goes to the east fence

She ascends the west wing

He looks at the south mountain

says it is really pleasing

She looks at the north star

says it is hard to get sleeping

He goes to the east fence again

returns at dusk loaded with wine

She ascends again the west wing

flies with screens and west wind

11/05/2017

（與金大俠合作）

她的眼兒媚，
他的眼兒威。
她看看一枚鑽戒，
他說是太貴。

他去了東籬，
她上了西樓。

他看看南山，
說是真陶醉。
她看看北斗，
說是難入睡。

他再去東籬，

把酒黃昏歸。
她又上西樓，

簾卷西風飛。

11/05/2017

英文譯詩附後

並請批評指正

Two Tones of Love and Marriage

Her eyes are charming

His eyes are mighty

She looks at a diamond ring
He says it’s too pricy

He goes to the east fence

She ascends the west wing

He looks at the south mountain

says it is really pleasing

She looks at the north star

says it is hard to get sleeping

He goes to the east fence again

returns at dusk loaded with wine

She ascends again the west wing

flies with screens and west wind

11/05/2017