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小學英語作文01:自我介紹(含音訊)

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名字和年齡:My name is peter, I am six years old.

興趣:My hobby is playing basketball.

個性:I am a talktive person.

 

My name is peter. I am six years old. I am from Taiwan. Many people ask me about my Chinese name because they think the meaning of it is very interesting. But I hope my friends can remember my English name rather than my Chinese one. My hobby is playing basketball. I usually play it with my friends after school, and I believe playing basketball will bring me good health. I am a talktive person. It is very difficult for me to keep quiet. Now I am studying in English, so I hope everyone can speak English to me. Otherwise I will feel very bad if I keep quiet.

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小學英語作文12:我的願望(含音訊)

 

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第一段开头句:I have no other wish except to be an English teacher.

第二段开头句:There is another reason why I want to be an English teacher.

第三段开头句:Now I am the English teacher's aide in my class.

 

I have no other wish except to be an English teacher.This is the only dream I have because I think being an English teacher is very cool.I can speak to foreign people smoothly and read English books and caricature easily.I can see English movies and some albums without titles.

 

There is another reason why I want to be an English teacher.My first English teacher was Mr.Gao in my primary school.I never went to an English class before in primary school so I was not as good as my classmates.But he always encourage me and helps me a lot.He always smiled at me and said,"Don't worry.I believe you can be better."So every time when I am too lazy to study English I remember what he said to me and keep on studying.

 

Now I am the English teacher's aide in my class.I love English and I love to teach my classmates,too.I always encourage my classmates and say,"Don't worry.I believe you can be better."just like Mr.Gao always said to me.I think with this perfect model I will be an English teacher in the future. Wish me luck!

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第一段開頭句:I remember last summer vacation I went to a beach to spend my holiday.

第二段開頭句:I remember one day I went to the beach with some other kids in the hotel.

第三段開頭句:On the day we will leaving we took a lot of picturs in the hotel and outside the hotel,too.

 

I remember last summer vacation I went to a beach to spend my holiday.It is a beach in the north TaiWan I stay there for a week with my family in a high class hotel near the beach.It happened that my father's friend was the manager of a hotel so we could have better rooms.Everything seen as expensive and big in the hotel room.The bathtub was big and could massage.The bed was big and comfortable.The window was big and I can see the beautiful beach through the glass.

 

I remember one day I went to the beach with some other kids in the hotel.We brought a lot of stuff such as:a beach ball,water guns,some snacks and drinks.We had a lot of fun on the beach.We played beach vollyball and some games.At about six o'clock,we sat on the beach,watching the sun set and chatting about nothing.The sun set was the most beautiful one I've ever seen.At that time,I really wanted the time to stopped for ever.

 

On the day we will leaving we took a lot of picturs in the hotel and outside the hotel,too.I also exchange my MSN count with some friends there and we're still good friends now.When I got in the car I went to goodbye to my friends then I looked at the beach.The trees near by the beach were bolw by the wind and looked like they were waving goodbye to me.What a wonderful ending for my vacation!I think this is the happiest moment in my life.

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小學英語作文09:令人驚喜的生日派對(含音訊)

 

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         小學英語作文10:(含音訊)

 

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第一段開頭句:Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.

第二段開頭句:When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.

第三段開頭句:And then,things changed completely.

 

Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said,"Today is my birthday,don't forget it!"At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

 

When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.When I open the door,there wasn't anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,"Coming home late tonight,mum and dad."I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I couldn't eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

 

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I couldn't believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.

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第一段开头句:I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.

第二段开头句:Then he still didn't talk to me during the next break time.

第三段开头句:In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.

 

I had a big argument with my good friend yesterday because of the baseball teams.During the break time,we argument about which team is the best in the league big.I thought it is yangqi and he thought it is redsocks.After the argument,he went of to say goodbye to me and close the door loudly.I was so angry with him.

 

Then he still didn't talk to me during the next break time.He didn't even look at me.I started to feel sad because he is my best friend.When it was time to go home I asked him if he wanted to go with me as usual.He looked at me with a strange look and still turned away.But this time,he did say goodbye to me quietly.

 

In the end,while I was watching TV the phone ring.It was him and he said he was sorry about what he did,he felt childish.I said never mind we are still good friends.Now I feel much better I hope we won't argument any more.

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第一段开头句:I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
第二段开头句:Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen.
第三段开头句:I finally when I got home everything became much better.

 

I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
In the
morning my alarm clock didn't work and I didn't went school on time.
In the
kitchen my mum was angry and yelling at me.She thought I went to bed too late last night.
On the way to school it started to rain and I forgot to bring my
umbrella.
What bad luck!

Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen.
When I was eating my lunch I found the rice taste
sour and there was a worm in my apple.
In the afternoon my
stomach felt strange.
It must be the sour rice.How could this be!

Finally when I got home everything became much better.
My stomach was fine and my mother prepared a
delicious dinner for me.
After dinner I had a nice hot bath.
Right now I felt great.
I hope everything can be fine
tomorrow.

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第一段開頭句:The people in Ciji are ordinary people.

第二段開頭句:Many people know that Ciji is an organization.

第三段開頭句:I like my school life very much, because I can do lots of thing with my classmates.

The people in Ciji are ordinary people, but they have done a great job.

Ciji started as a group of 30 housewives, who saved a small amount of money each day and has grown to have more than 4.5 million members worldwide.

Many people know that Ciji is an organization that focuses on community service and outreach, eapecially in the areas of medicine, education, and disaster relief.

It conducts its mission via an international network of volunteers.

It has many sub-organizations around the world.

They help to build many hospitals and schools worldwide, from kindergardens to universities and medical schools.

I hope someday I can be a member of Ciji too.

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進入有聲;小學英語作文05:我們這一班(含音訊) 2012-11-19

 

Tips寫作技巧:

 

第一段開頭句:I like to go to school.

第二段開頭句:All of the boys in my class are outgoing.

第三段開頭句:I like my school life very much, because I can do lots of thing with my classmates.

 

I like to go to school. There are many activities I can do at school with my classmates. We can play sports or music or act in a play. Sometimes we have to write a team project or geography or science class. If our project takes the prize of a competition in school, we will win prizes like dictionaries or computer games. All of the boys in my class are outgoing.

My classmates and I like to watch sports games and enjoy outdoor activities. We like to play basketball and skate with our friends. I like my school life very much, because I can do lots of thing with my classmates. I get to spend time with them. They are not only my classmates but also my best friends.

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進入有聲;小學英語作文04我的家庭(含音訊)

 

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第一段開頭句:There are four people in my family.

第二段開頭句:In my family I love my puppy best.

第三段開頭句:I love my family very much.

 

Including me,there are four people in my family:my dad, mom,and my older sister .My family is a small family,and we also have a puppy.It's name is baby.

In my family, I love my puppy best. because daddy and mom do not have time to play with me ,and my older sister has to go to school,so I always talk to baby while they are out.

I love my family very much,so I hope daddy and mom will not be so busy and they will have more time to stay at home.I think baby also wants them to stay at home longer.

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第一段的開頭句:JianMing Wang has a round face.

第二段的開頭句:When Wang was a child,he was very interested in baseball.

第三段的開頭句:Wang is now a starting pitcher for the U.S. Major League Baseball Team--NewYork Yankees.

 

JianMing Wang has a round face with dark straight hair.He is the honour of Taiwan.

When Wang was a boy,he was very interested in baseball.So he joined the school team as a pitcher. At the beginning,his parents didn't want him to play baseball,but he liked baseball so much that he didn't want to give it up.He kept practising his pitching,and gradually got better.

Wang is now a starting pitcher for the U.S. Major League Baseball Team--NewYork Yankees.He shows no fear whenever he pitches.He is always calm.He has become a sports hero around the world.He is my favourite hero too.

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第一段開頭句:My mom is about 45 years old.

第二段開頭句:My mom is always reasonable.

第三段開頭句:I love my mom and so I give her a hug.

 

My mom is about 45 years old.She has long hair and very big eyes. She is a housewife. She always helps me with my homework before she cleans the house and prepares dinner for my whole family. She is really a nice and kind mother.

My mom is always very reasonable. All she asks for is for me to complete my schoolwork. If I get a good mark on my test,she will be very happy. If I don't do well,she won't get angry. She will encourage me to do better next time.

I love my mom,so I give her a hug when I get home,and tell her she is the best mom in the world.

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